tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21099449.post4851607986260848557..comments2023-11-02T09:32:27.746-04:00Comments on Caroline Richmond, YA Author: The Evolution of a Query, Part IICaroline Tung Richmondhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10668185436035686911noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21099449.post-11490741537380985552010-08-14T13:18:04.064-04:002010-08-14T13:18:04.064-04:00I would like to exchange links with your site caro...I would like to exchange links with your site carolineinspace.blogspot.com<br />Is this possible?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21099449.post-29397229393522509482010-08-04T06:34:33.373-04:002010-08-04T06:34:33.373-04:00Hey, I redid my queries at least 20 times before I...Hey, I redid my queries at least 20 times before I put it on absolutewrite.com or yalitchat.ning.com so I feel your pain.<br /><br />One think I think is missing in the query example is a good hook sentence at the end of the first paragraph. Have fun on the rewrite and resub it, we are cheering for you :-DLM Prestonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624508396760965680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21099449.post-78434896465362329782010-08-03T20:25:09.796-04:002010-08-03T20:25:09.796-04:00Also, the first part reads EXACTLY the same as the...Also, the first part reads EXACTLY the same as the back summary on Sorcerer's Stone. :) That was the first thing I noticed when I started reading.Rachaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11918987890132222901noreply@blogger.com