tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21099449.post4241153085834758546..comments2023-11-02T09:32:27.746-04:00Comments on Caroline Richmond, YA Author: Teaser Tuesday!Caroline Tung Richmondhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10668185436035686911noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21099449.post-90376463316713749942011-01-26T12:33:02.344-05:002011-01-26T12:33:02.344-05:00Ah, thanks guys for the lovely comments!
Lynn, yo...Ah, thanks guys for the lovely comments!<br /><br />Lynn, your sentences rock! And I will definitely turn to you when I need to find a beta! Hmm, this story might not be finished for a long time though... Haha. <br /><br />Jana, your comment brightened my day. Thank you!<br /><br />Lisa, I think I might be too much of a chicken to post teasers every week!Caroline Tung Richmondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10668185436035686911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21099449.post-8820025166110543592011-01-25T17:10:57.800-05:002011-01-25T17:10:57.800-05:00Teaser Tuesday? Does this mean we get something EV...Teaser Tuesday? Does this mean we get something EVERY tuesday? Cause that would be awesome.<br /><br />I like some version of the original better than your other two options because I liked knowing I was suddenly on a space ship in the very first sentence. Not at space camp. Not at a children's museum. But on a space ship, hand on the airlock. Very cool.lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05318691391720543494noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21099449.post-10754977122870399672011-01-25T14:59:47.154-05:002011-01-25T14:59:47.154-05:00Ha, Lynn's recommended sentence is EXACTLY wha...Ha, Lynn's recommended sentence is EXACTLY what I was going to write. Love this, Caroline. You're such a gifted writer!Janahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04438501019300010838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21099449.post-63703654087444070072011-01-25T12:30:51.418-05:002011-01-25T12:30:51.418-05:00Love this! But this is why I hate snippets ... now...Love this! But this is why I hate snippets ... now I want to read the rest, and can't :( Whenever you need a beta ... :)<br /><br />What about "Standing next to the airlock, Grace Salinger checked her spacesuit." ? Or a modification of Option 1: "Helmet in hand, Grace Salinger double-checked her spacesuit."<br /><br />And dude, I wish my childhood chores included squeegee-ing a spaceship!Andrea Coulterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13478845861604754432noreply@blogger.com